who blinds herself, to see.
Gorgeous! 🤎✨
Ahhh asma!! Thank you soo much love ♥️
Beautiful
thank you love!!♥️
So beautiful in a haunting sort of way! Awestruck really. The storytelling is insane on this one. <3
I truly appreciate it ritu!! Thank you for reading❤️❤️
I am awestruck. The visual picture that you're able to paint throughout the poem is beautiful and moving. Wow..just wow!!
I’m so grateful that you could read it and liked it reeshabh!! this comment actually makes me so happy, thank you. ♥️♥️🥹
You never cease to amaze me Lilly! I love how you set the scene before the poem, its a lovely touch!
I really tried man! I’m glad you liked it!! Thank youuu ♥️♥️
LILY THE GOAT 🗣️🐐
"The essence of it was so fragile I couldn't rush it" ugh I love when you can just tell a writer is putting everything they have in their work. This is exquisite
Aww, I can’t 😭, you are soo kind! Thank you for recognizing that Marie, I love youuuu♥️♥️
So pretty, well done!
‘ and rehearse all the dreadful ways,
I’d fall. ‘
- unfortunately, this one hit hard. Fortunately, this one hit hard. Thanks for recognizing the beauty in pain like always.
I like that one tooo! It felt super honest to write that, I’m glad you read it Tyler! Thank you as always!!♥️♥️
so beautiful lily… it reminds me of when i used to go watch ballet shows.
Aww, that made me soo happy! Thank you for reading naeema!! ♥️♥️
Wow, this is truly wonderful. It shows how much work u put into it
thank you soo much may! I’m glad you read it 🫶🏼🫶🏼🫶🏼
Gorgeous! 🤎✨
Ahhh asma!! Thank you soo much love ♥️
Beautiful
thank you love!!♥️
So beautiful in a haunting sort of way! Awestruck really. The storytelling is insane on this one. <3
I truly appreciate it ritu!! Thank you for reading❤️❤️
I am awestruck. The visual picture that you're able to paint throughout the poem is beautiful and moving. Wow..just wow!!
I’m so grateful that you could read it and liked it reeshabh!! this comment actually makes me so happy, thank you. ♥️♥️🥹
You never cease to amaze me Lilly! I love how you set the scene before the poem, its a lovely touch!
I really tried man! I’m glad you liked it!! Thank youuu ♥️♥️
LILY THE GOAT 🗣️🐐
"The essence of it was so fragile I couldn't rush it" ugh I love when you can just tell a writer is putting everything they have in their work. This is exquisite
Aww, I can’t 😭, you are soo kind! Thank you for recognizing that Marie, I love youuuu♥️♥️
So pretty, well done!
‘ and rehearse all the dreadful ways,
I’d fall. ‘
- unfortunately, this one hit hard. Fortunately, this one hit hard. Thanks for recognizing the beauty in pain like always.
I like that one tooo! It felt super honest to write that, I’m glad you read it Tyler! Thank you as always!!♥️♥️
so beautiful lily… it reminds me of when i used to go watch ballet shows.
Aww, that made me soo happy! Thank you for reading naeema!! ♥️♥️
Wow, this is truly wonderful. It shows how much work u put into it
thank you soo much may! I’m glad you read it 🫶🏼🫶🏼🫶🏼