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Charlotte's avatar

This was so emotional and beautifully written lily, I can’t wait for what you write next <33

Lily's avatar

Omggg! Charlotteee!! Thank you so much☹️❤️ I’m posting something very soon;)

Lucia's avatar

This is so beautifully written! Or was emotional, stunning, and all around lovely. Never stop writing 🩷

Lucia's avatar

Oops *it was

Lily's avatar

I won’t🥹🥹 Thank you Lucia so much for reading it! ❤️

FleischT's avatar

‘ for all she knew, they would last forever. ‘ - heartbreaking! This is such quality work like always! ❤️

Lily's avatar

Thank you soo much for reading Tyler!! You don’t know how precious this is..🥹🫶🫶

Dayana's avatar

Incredible work, gorgeously written and so much emotion!

This line: "She sold her soul to the whims of his eyes." so beyond good! <3

Lily's avatar

Aww thanks girl! I like that line too… thanks for reading❤️❤️

Seren Bayramoglu's avatar

Beautifully written ❤️❤️❤️

Lily's avatar

Thank YOU!!❤️

Greg's avatar

Writing about love and affection is an ache and yearn all poets feel and you have accomplished it with such beautiful elegance

Lily's avatar

Really?!! Thank you so much Greg, you’re soo kind 🥹

Greg's avatar

Thank YOU, for sharing

Veronika Gold🩷's avatar

It's beautiful!💌

Lily's avatar

Thanks for reading Veronica! 💕

Andrea (Andy) Curran 🌄's avatar

I love this really well done!

Lily's avatar

♥️♥️